My puppets name is Tandy and shes a cazzy fur brain girl and shes really afad , Tandy loves mushed up leafs she will do anything to get them or fur balls and hants ice cream and chocolate but.. thats her friends favorite.
What did I learn? In your writing when you put silly get better words like cazzy and there lots and lots more.
What did I do well? I used good desiccating words not boring word.
What I need to do next time? Use good desiccating words and similes.
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