His wrinkles look like a puzzle and go deep into his face as if someones pushed them into his skin.
What did I do well? Destab and put my voice into it.
What did I learn? To put personnalty into writting.
What is my next learning step? To make a smaer sentes.
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I LOVE this sentence, Kelly. You've really thought hard about what words to use and you've used them well.
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